I really like the way that you're playing around with the format, DP. Like others have said, i love the contradictory aura about it. i see i'm up for a challange, you've been writing quite a bit. Anyway, keep it up!!

"Nothing’s wrong

Nothing’s wrong…."

I'm in love with this poem. Wonderfull experiment. It's as if the person is contradicting her/himself. I like the format, how you capitilized some of the words. It really made it stand out.

This reminds me a lot of my very first piece on here, called "A Doll's Life". I hope you're doing okay. I really like this peice..so full of emotion.

*Hillary*

Oh. I really like it. I can relate. It shows how people can be in denial. Yes, I really like it. Great poem!