Please update soon!

SL

a little disapointed it was going a little to fast could of added more deial and not jumped to one scean after another. But it was good keep it up.

BO! now whats going to happen??!! i really hoped that she would become a vampire, also in the last chapter you said that they were allowed to wear a ribbon around their necks is it cause some of them are vampires too? (just guessing) keep updating!

Gah! Wasn't expecting THAT! Oh, that was unfair leaving it off there. Please update soon.I can't wait to read what happens next.

Sana is taking this rather well. If it was me I'd be trying to pulverise his scrawny vampire...er...'butt'. I think the reincarnation bit allows it to make more sense. It seems logical that she might be more 'go-with-the-flow' about this whole situation if she was actually a vampire in her previous life.

So, Tyson still freaks me out. I don't like him and I think he is an evil necklace-residing perverted stalker freak. Perhaps he is intended to get better as time goes on but I don't trust him.

Not at all...

lol, you get your inspiration from a necklace? THat's kinda creepy, having it right there in front of you. Br... me, I usually get inspiration for my stories when I'm supposed to be working. Ha-ha I'm so irresponsible...

Well, thank you for updating soon. Mwahahahaha. I'll be back! *disappears through trap door*

~Choco

Wow... so Tyson is his name? Hm...they don't actually seem..."evil" like on some stories. The vampires don't have the demonic thing to them. I was kinda surprised when they talk normally to each other. But he wanted to...show her off?? Odd...

Oh well. In my vamp fics they don't really have that trait, but that's only mine. Vamps aren't real, so they could be any way in any story. I like the way you changed their normal personality.

nice,nice so sana is a vampire? and another thing is she lesbian? keep updating!

sounds really intersting!

Acting differently...watch out!

Very One Ring. Why doesn't she want to take the necklace off? I suppose it has some evil magic that binds her to it. That's really creepy, how it glows. Does it allow him to take control of her?

Speaking of 'him' no matter how tired a girl is, she would not be unsurprised to see a man staring at her in the shower. She would probably shriek at him and try to kick him somewhere rather painful if not throwing everything at him within reach. At the very least she might swear and ask him what the freak he thinks he's doing.

That's just my opinion. Don't mind me.

Another wonderful chapter. I'm just browsing the romance section and your summary looked interesting. I like vampire stories and read them every once in a while.

This boy scares me. Perhaps it is the fact that he is a shower pervert.

Moving on. ^_^

Ooh this necklace thing really is the real deal when it comes to evil, isn't it? This is why I am very suspicious of beautiful jewerly made out of rubies and emeralds in particular. They ALWAYS turn evil.

Sana Smith is the poor little pawn who looses her soul in the bargain I take it. I don't know her yet so I can't make any judgements on her personality.

I'm intrigued. Moving on!

really good, i like how you came up with it and Very detailed. Hurry up for the next one lol

Quite Cool so far. Although you might want to take just a tiny bit more time discribing the details. (No, I don't mean the nude body. I mean like the weather, or the surrounding. Sometimes that could help. And about the lesbianism thing... I'm not against it. I think it's quite unique for a story like this. Although I wasn't quite clear on whether Sana and the others were lesbians too...Anyways. Continue!

Thats hilarious! "Um. You're Welcome" This story just made my day. I can't wait for you to update. Please do it soon!

Please write more. I like it so far! Pllease...

lol. Anyway, I like it. Continue soon, please!

I like the story so far. I'm sure you'll come up with more ideas for this. You're just like me. I go from one story to the next, but then I return and continue. I hope you do the same because you can really get a nice plot from what you started. Keep it up!