DP, this is still not "how you usually write". Given, it's more "normal" than the experiment but you broke it up into stanzas, which i really liked ^^.

Symbolic, meaningful. I like how for the most part you were asking questions intead of stating facts. Adds a nice touch to the poem. Lovely. Check my poetry when you have the time. (I'm addind you to my favorites)

Wow. This is beautiful. Extremely expressive. This "experiment" as you say is great, but if you choose to go back to your style where you are more comfortable that's great. Keep it up!:)