Hahaha :D I love the summary. This looks promising... *continues reading*

he's a jerk. but he's probably only acting like that cause he's confused too.

haha sounds funny already.

Amazing story. Love everything about it! =D
I have to check if you have a squeal. =D

I liked your story. Jesse sounds hot.

Uh, seriously, how old are you? Because, not to be offensive or anything, but your writing is riddled with grammatical errors and childish language.

I love this story!

Hehe

xx

sequel?

prettypleasewithsugarontop??

-sniffle, tear tear- are u making a damned sequel? lol just had to ask haha

Typical, girl hates her step dad, lol i was the same way when i met mine, but now hes a complete **. I like the story so far

First off, i'd like to say that your summary TOTALLY caught my attention. It's so absurdly hilarious! :) Where did you get all these ideas from! Gosh.

Uhm, the first few chapters were kind of confusing. No, not the plot, more like the way you wrote it. The commas were missing at some places (and it gets horribly distracting after a while), there were quite a number of typos.

BUT (ah, yes, we all love the buts), the storyline made up for it. The entire plot, with all it's uniqueness (assuming such word exists.), made this story something one would definitely enjoy, even in one sitting.

So yes, I loved it. From the lame jokes Stacie cracked, to the weird, demented family she has (GRANDMA WAS A CLASSIC! Hahaha!), the arrogant, stiff in the whole i'm-a-man-so-i-shouldn't-go-all-emotional-and-declare-my-undying-love kind of character Jesse plays (I WANNA SEE HOW HE LOOKS LIKE! Can i, can i?), to the skateboarding antiques (though there wasn't a lot.), to the whole happily-ever-after clicheness yet with a touch of reality, and to everything else I failed to mention.

Loved it. :D

so I LOVE this story, its awamzing but I do have one problem; SPELLING! yes you have actual correctly spelled words but they aren'd what of the right meaning ( lye instead of lie, you're instead of your) I know its not always aparent because the words youu use ARE real words, but it makes me sad because this is an amazing story and its just these little things that bring it down.

sry if I'm being harsh,

-LenkaPenka

I am completely in love with ur story ur an awesome writer not to mention jesse is so hott! lol:} it seemed kind of rushed at the end tho anyway luv ur story!

I can honestly say that I loved thus story. it really was awesome, and i thought that it was just really cute and funny in places. and i loved the way you didnt change jesse, he stayed the same person, becasue it would just be unrealistic if he all of a sudden went all lovey dovey. and anyway i loved it so much, and hope that you decide to write something else eventually.

I love this, but there are somethings that really bother me. Whenever you want to use "an" you type "and" and "definitely" is not spelled "defiantly". They have two different meanings.