I specifically like the 'baby' lines. The poem doesn't urge me to read it - I got distracted mid-way and came back to it later. I suppose it's not really .. my 'sort'. It's quite set in the past almost, remeniscing and hopeful. Angsty. 'I'm love-sick' sums it up.

very intense and emotional. thanks for sharing and keep writing!

p.s. God loves you and so do I!

this was a wonderful poem i also like your name.

I love this and I can relate so well. It reminds me a little bit of my poem, "The Roses Are Dead, my Dear". Except mine is a bit more depressing. Although yours is sad, I love that it's got a hint of optimism and that obsession to go about finding all the memories, whereas I just feel numb.

Great job. I love it. -Hillary-