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Coda Lovelance 2005-09-04 . chapter 1
i really like: "I missing more than half of the puzzle" and also how throughout the whole thing there's an air of "i hate you/don't leave me" (are those lyrics? i know i didn't make it up...) it's really awesome how oyu end so bluntly, leaving the reader to imagine the rest.
Nina Cross Knyght 2005-09-04 . chapter 1
Lol, having more than one personalities isn't a bad thing.. Unless you start killing that is. Anyways, nice poem.. Lovely. I have that problem also. I had a guy that my mum worked with.. He became my friend then something more, but it ended there after she quit. I forgot everything bout him.. Still can't remember.. Lovely poem once again.

Sara
Faithless Juliet 2005-09-03 . chapter 1
Interest; you bare your soul in this. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.
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