Wow, sorry for my horrible lack of timing and speed in getting to the reviews. Reality bites sometimes.

Lol, well first off, I believe there is a line button you can replace all those "brakes" with, that way we will know instead of you naming off your computer, lol.

Intresting chapter, kinda different, but with promise I'm sure. It took me a bit to regain all of the story, but I've got it again, so I look forward to another update! In the near future? :D

Lol, good job.

-Anters-

Wow, long time no talk, huh? Really nice to see you updating again!

Your valiant return was good, the descrptions, the pace, everything is as steady as ever! Like the new character intros as well.

Hope you update again soon!

-Anters-

Nice to see you've updated! This chapter was as good as always, a nice descriptive plot of information, plus a well weeved piece of story! Maybe a small word of advice though: Maybe use line breaks as not to confuse people with what you just wrote and the changed scene. Otherwise, great job, I love the work!

-Anters-

That is great. I love the way you wrote it. I admire that...

Dang, another great chapter. You know, the way this story is writen kinda reminds me of that movie Sin City. But, I love the story, keep up the awesome writting work!

-Anters-

Asoultley baffiling! Your wrtting has defenatley shot up from your other story, this chapter was VERY well written! So descriptive and paced nicely. I'm SO looking forward to another chapter!

-Anters-