Hypnotic. . .

The gluey gush of sentences is amazing, it trickles off the screen. The joined up words etc. are inventive and they stand out. Nice job :)

*applauds* I love the ending... concise and sweet and firm and realistic... absolutely amazing. I also like how you run words together-I haven't seen it before and it lends a catch-phrase-like quality to those words (the only one that doesn't work for me is 'perfectworld' it's just too short for people to think it's anything but a upload error... maybe if you made the phrase longer before you ran it together?) anyway... I love it.

This poem displays an excellent understanding of the nature of human beings and of writers in particular.