Until it all comes shattering down? what comes shattering down that breaks this glass box of happiness that can't break? yes, never completely heal but I like to think that the stronger people grow from their pains - the holes become step latters to an eventual triumph. As for the poem itself, it was good with a classic but not overdone idea and no overtried beat or anything. Kudos

Mack

Flows nicely. Love the glass box metaphor.