This story is GREAT! Update SOON ok? OK!

Get better soon. It wasn't quite as good as normal, but I'm also bad when sick. The grammar and punctuation could use a little bit of work, but I like it. Kepp going!!

THis is really good! i love it, please update soon!

Aww, i'm sorry you're sick. I give you hugs and hope you feel better. i liked the chapter. Update soon please!

Good chap. It's fairly long compared to your other ones. Kewlio.

I love how often you update. Now, if only you would do the same with your other stories... lol, just kidding.

The details are good, it doesn't skim over parts, the plot is going not too slow but not too fast...Very good. Congrats. People rarely get a review from me that's totally praise.

Anyways, keep up the good work.

You're welcome. ALex and Louis sound like my brother. He's obsessed with Halo, or really Halo 2. Will Louis find a girl? OR will he just play Halo? (jk, you don't have to answer that. Update soon please.

Okay, a good story with nearly no errors, but you need to break up dialogue. You can't have two different people talking in the same paragraph because it gets confusing. Anyway, please update soon.

another great chapter! i'm really interested about caia, and i can't wait to see what happens with her. i enjoyed reading alex's ramblings, they were amusing :) i hope you don't stop writing this story, i look forward to more!

Good. Short but sweet. Update, soon, please!

Oh, and you could put a little bit more detail. You say the people's gender, hair and eye color. You don't tell their height, skin color, clothing, etc. Just a bit of constructive criticism.

i love it! I really hope you update soon.

I really enjoyed reading this story, and i especially liked the characters. keep up the good work :)

~C

i love this story! update soon!

Yo! Great beginning! I love it :D please please update soon~ ^__^ are we going to see more of Louis too? Hehe!

-Sabby-xoxox-

I like it. Its really good. Since you're short on inspiration for the next chapter here's a thought: Why not do the next chapter covering the same spanse of time that these two have, but from the girl's POV. Just my thoughts anyways.

Hey, nice story soo far hope you update soon!