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| Aleara 2005-10-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseI'm not ready for most of those things...but I'm ready to listen, if you'd just let me.You have no idea how much I've seen how wrong I've been |
| Nimnengil Parmanole 2005-09-05 ch 1, | abusejust tell things plainly. she'll listen to you. trust in the scott. he's smarter than he acts.oh, and the writing is very good as well. |
| darkpaladin13 2005-09-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseWriting wise not your best, a little rough but emotionally and feeling wise it's up there with your others. I feel you on this and you know I'm here for you . . . just call or something. The emotions really carry this, great work |
| Allie, who was your sister ... 2005-09-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseDarling...I luv you still even if you hate my guts, or won't talk to me, or whatever's going on in your head. I wish that you'd just talk to me for once. I'm sorry things are so terrible for you. |