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Plinky 2005-12-24 . chapter 28
Wow, a purdy picture!! Yay!! They're all good, what are you talking about!? Some of them obviously have a lot of meaning for you, and you can see that glowing through the words. Beautiful imagery and description, and a lot of lovely philosophical thoughts.

Beautiful collection of poems!! Keep writing!
Plinky 2005-12-24 . chapter 27
Beautiful. Lovely poem. That's all I can say! Really lovely.
Plinky 2005-12-24 . chapter 26
Lovely voice. Really nicely expressed poem. Keep writing!
Plinky 2005-12-24 . chapter 25
"I’ll pick you up off your feet / I’ll teach you to fly" Beautiful lines.

Lovely poem. Keep writing!
Plinky 2005-12-24 . chapter 24
That's so scary - I was writing the other day, and started a poem with the line 'I am lost/found'. Very creepy.

Lovely poem. I really like where you went with this idea. Keep writing!
Plinky 2005-12-24 . chapter 23
I agree - we spend too much time wishing. Really worded nicely. Keep writing!
Plinky 2005-12-24 . chapter 22
Lovely.
Plinky 2005-12-24 . chapter 21
Lovely. I like the ending. Keep writing!
Plinky 2005-12-24 . chapter 20
Oh, I can so identify with this. Gorgeously expressed. Really lovely. I love the second stanza. Keep writing!
Plinky 2005-12-24 . chapter 17
Did I not review this one?

Oh.

Lovely. Really nice - powerful verbs.

groovy. Keep writing!
Plinky 2005-12-18 . chapter 19
Wow, I like this!

I was at a party last night. Haha- I was the only sober one there. So funny.

Not that that has anything to do with this. Lovely contrast. The first stanza has a really quick, almost dizzy pace, which is fantastic, and I like the effect that the italics have on the second stanza.

The ending is lovely.

Keep writing!
Plinky 2005-12-16 . chapter 18
Nice voice. Emotion too. Lovely poem.

I have to go now (again) but I'll be back soon! Keep writing!
Plinky 2005-12-16 . chapter 16
Interesting idea - the italic lines are a nice whatever you call it. Interesting ending - not what I was expecting!
Plinky 2005-12-16 . chapter 15
Beautiful poem. Really well expressed emotion. I love the ending. Sorry these reviews are getting a little short. I want to keep reading!

Really well expressed, lovely idea. Keep writing!
Plinky 2005-12-16 . chapter 14
Lovely imagery (there I go again...) and a beautiful ending. fantastic poetry!
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