 Plinky 2005-12-24 . chapter 28Wow, a purdy picture!! Yay!! They're all good, what are you talking about!? Some of them obviously have a lot of meaning for you, and you can see that glowing through the words. Beautiful imagery and description, and a lot of lovely philosophical thoughts.
Beautiful collection of poems!! Keep writing! |
 Plinky 2005-12-24 . chapter 27Beautiful. Lovely poem. That's all I can say! Really lovely. |
 Plinky 2005-12-24 . chapter 26Lovely voice. Really nicely expressed poem. Keep writing! |
 Plinky 2005-12-24 . chapter 25"I’ll pick you up off your feet / I’ll teach you to fly" Beautiful lines.
Lovely poem. Keep writing! |
 Plinky 2005-12-24 . chapter 24That's so scary - I was writing the other day, and started a poem with the line 'I am lost/found'. Very creepy.
Lovely poem. I really like where you went with this idea. Keep writing! |
 Plinky 2005-12-24 . chapter 23I agree - we spend too much time wishing. Really worded nicely. Keep writing! |
 Plinky 2005-12-24 . chapter 22Lovely. |
 Plinky 2005-12-24 . chapter 21Lovely. I like the ending. Keep writing! |
 Plinky 2005-12-24 . chapter 20Oh, I can so identify with this. Gorgeously expressed. Really lovely. I love the second stanza. Keep writing! |
 Plinky 2005-12-24 . chapter 17Did I not review this one?
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Lovely. Really nice - powerful verbs.
groovy. Keep writing! |
 Plinky 2005-12-18 . chapter 19Wow, I like this!
I was at a party last night. Haha- I was the only sober one there. So funny.
Not that that has anything to do with this. Lovely contrast. The first stanza has a really quick, almost dizzy pace, which is fantastic, and I like the effect that the italics have on the second stanza.
The ending is lovely.
Keep writing! |
 Plinky 2005-12-16 . chapter 18Nice voice. Emotion too. Lovely poem.
I have to go now (again) but I'll be back soon! Keep writing! |
 Plinky 2005-12-16 . chapter 16Interesting idea - the italic lines are a nice whatever you call it. Interesting ending - not what I was expecting! |
 Plinky 2005-12-16 . chapter 15Beautiful poem. Really well expressed emotion. I love the ending. Sorry these reviews are getting a little short. I want to keep reading!
Really well expressed, lovely idea. Keep writing! |
 Plinky 2005-12-16 . chapter 14Lovely imagery (there I go again...) and a beautiful ending. fantastic poetry! |