Nice. It's kind of humorous too. I like it. :P

-Sarah

Another good poem. (good music in your biography)

Brilliant, honest, appealing in so many ways. I completely adore this. It has such clear, catching flow to it, its honesty is irresistable.

God, that was awesome! I love how the "looks are only skin-deep" line played throughout so perfectly and how you incorporated so many different languages. and i think the reason they want their pic taken in front of the same tourist attractions is b/c whenever you take a picture, it's like evidence/proof that you've been somewhere and done something significant in your life or something you've always wanted to do or see or accomplish...and now that you've done it you can prove it to the world that you made something of your life by this particular event. great job...really phenomenal writing!