Wow, lovely poem. I love the first line. Really lovely, and doesn't sound forced. A lot of the time, when people try to do poems like this you end up with some words/lines sounding out of place, but you don't have that.Good poem!Keep writing, and thanks for the reviews!

ohmigosh! unbelievable! i love it! it reminds me of music. what does vive l'amour mean? great job. cnat wait to read all your other stuff.

Nice work here. It isn't easy to write rhyming poems and not come off sounding cheesy (personally, I avoid rhyme schemes most of the time...too challenging!)but you've pulled it off quite nicely. A happy poem, very lively tone. The words in each line look like they belong where they are, which is always a good thing. Do keep writing =D

Wow, I love the descriptions and the elegance in this poem. Beautifully written.

~~Trinity

This is absolutely wonderful! You've captured the essence of love in about ten lines. That's nuts! I adore how down the side is "Vive L'Amour" and thus, the inspiration for the title. Stunning work, and going on my favs list!