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| TeenageSurvivor 2008-07-24 ch 12, | abuseThis is definitely one of the best stories I've read on Fictionpress. Update soon! |
| Napris 2008-07-18 ch 1, | abuseFrom the first paragraph I had fallen in complete and irrevocable love for your story, okay? I have read this before ... but I don't think I had complimented your writing enough. Or to that degree, anyhow. |
| loveroffiction 2008-07-18 ch 12, | abuseThis is a fantastic, involving, original, unique story! I have a really early morning tomorrow and I should have gone to sleep AGES ago but I couldn't because this story is SO DAMN ABSORBING! I LOVE it! And that isn't a small compliment - I'm a BIG reader. I recognize quality writing when I read it. This may not have come to your attention, but this story has a similar feel to 'Rocked Like Me' by Enigmatic Day. It isn't finished yet either (unfortunately) but I feel you'd enjoy the type of humor it expresses. It might inspire you (via it's similarity) to continue on with this story. I hope so. Please, PLEASE, PLEASE update - it doesn't even have to be soon. It would be a crime not to complete this masterpiece. With many thanks, Nat. |
| personyoudontknow 2008-07-13 ch 12, | abusethis story is soo amazing! nevermind that i dont understand nearly half of what Janie says :D i cant wait for the rest, so i'm very glad that you're planning on finishing by september :D this must be a commonly asked question but much more of the story is there to write? also, will we get to see more lucan/the moretti family? :D:D:D |
| Ryosami 2008-07-12 ch 12, | abuseI hope you finish this fiction soon. O_O It's getting dramatic and I mean, there are only 3-4 more chapters to go anyway, right? Hopefully your schedule isn't busy 24/7! We'll be waiting! =) |
| CrossMyHeart 2008-07-11 ch 12, | abuseyou`re probably not going to update this are you? oh well, i`ll tell you to anyways!! UPDATE! its to great not to! XxCrossMyHeartxX |
| Ryosami 2008-07-10 ch 7, | abuseHaha! Interesting turn of events. I'd love to see Rafe jealous. |
| Ryosami 2008-07-10 ch 5, | abuseI'm loving this! I think the rivalry between Lucan and Rafe is just pure genius. |
| Ryosami 2008-07-10 ch 4, | abuseMan, is this chemistry or what?! XD |
| Ryosami 2008-07-10 ch 2, | abuseHAHA. I love his mom. |
| Ryosami 2008-07-10 ch 1, | abuseI LOVE THIS! As a fellow Canadian, I can't be any happier to find a fiction that reeks of our culture! (e.g. the bay, bank of montreal) Thank you for being so witty and making us look so damn good. =D I love your sense of humour. It got me laughing like, every five seconds. I'd tell you to give up writing for stand-up comedy, but your writing's too good so I'll decide against it. =D How about a dual-career? By the way, I love Indian food, even though I'm not Indian and even though you probably don't care. The smell of curry is like... godly! =D See all the happy faces I made? That goes to show how happy this fiction makes me feel cuz it's so damn funny. Anyway, I'll read the next chapter now. |
| sunny 2008-07-06 ch 12, anon. | abuseDON'T GIVE THIS UP. Come back and finish it, its not fair that you left such an awesome story uncomplete for TWO FREAKIN YEARS. Now that is some messed up pie-**. I'll be waiting for an update. |
| oogahli 2008-07-02 ch 12, | abusehey awesome story! can't wait for the next chapter =] |
| i am makulit 2008-07-01 ch 12, anon. | abuseYou realize everyone's begging you to finish this oh so amazing story!? Please do! :D |
| Elle Desdichado 2008-06-29 ch 12, | abuseHey Deena! re-read all chapters - again. You must know by now how UNIQUE your story is compared to all others, so witty and moving... so even if you replace all your science terms by medicine terms because you swim in it, there's no problem!! just, it's been two years since your last update, a whole year since I discovered Jane and Rafe, please this story deserves to be finished. I know it must be rally hard to write with this science style and Jane awkwardness but maybe if all your readers and reviewers did cheer you (YAY FOR DEENA!) it would decide you to go further. I'm dying, here! You're a chief |