hehe, I know what year Tim's in! So like next's chapter, which is next week, are you gonna write down what happened next week in ur real life? or something like that? sorry, I"m confusing myself. Great story! Keep on writing!

I love the names, especially Fletcher (aka-Chikamunk). Krista, I'm growing suspicioius, if Raya had an 'h' instead of a 'y', you'd know what it spells out. Hmm...great story! I think I just may put this on my favorites or at least on alert!

Oh, whoa, ok, I think I'm getting the hint that this is about someone else than Clara. Keep on writing!

This is basically part of your life story. Good job Krista!

k, good job!

Sounds like torture lol.You seem to have some like,run on sentences though.Like the very first two sentences for example.Other then that it looks good.