O_O wow!! that was short, but powerful, don't we all just love that kinda stuff :P

~x~

You're starting to scare me, Akki. You aren't suicidal, are you? Or do you just like writing suicidal poems like my friend who sometimes inspires me to write my own very depressing poems? Anywho, this was dark, and angsty, and sounds a lot like either a very angsty TyKa fanfic (which, by the way, i probably wouldn't read due to my hatred towards death fics) paraphrased into a poem, or like an evanescence song. Keep up the good work!

This is AWESOME! Really! I know how you feel I truly do! We'll never be able to satisfy them...that's why we should leave them! Well continue writting!

Byes

-Corri

PS Have an awesome-o day that would kick anyone's side of holy noodles!