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| zephyr deity 2006-04-20 ch 1, | abuseLOL, great story. Definitely interesting despite a few errors. P.S. Thanks for the reviews. I really appreciated it. |
| CK 2006-02-28 ch 1, anon. | abusehas a good flow to it so far! do continue. |
| Plinky 2005-11-20 ch 1, | abuseHahahahahahahahaha. Lol, I love this, it's really good!! I love Mel's random mind - mine's exactly the same. Hahaha. I like the sort of vague, drifting style you have - it's really lovely. Lovely beginning, if you write any more I definitely want to read! Keep writing! |
| crying-kitten 2005-09-16 ch 1, | abuseI really like this! It made me laugh out loud. You really caught the feelings of meeting a cute guy in an embarrassing situation. There were some grammar/spelling errors but then again, I was warned of that when I read your profile. :) Good job, I shall be looking for updates! Thanks for reviewing my story. I added the mention of her age just for you! |