Excellently written. :) I got sidetracked a bit, I was reading one of your other stories to begin with, heh.

Hmm. I'm probably wrong, but I get the impression that Jessica is doing the same thing to the narrator as Andrew did to her. Possesive ghosts...fun.

Wow that was really good

"I'll bet this makes absolutely no sense, but think about it and it will."

I guess I'm a bit stupid, because I still don't understand it...haha.

But it was really good despite my inability to make sense of it. Hmm...maybe if I think about it a while longer it'll make more sense...

this is a weird story.. but i enjoyed nevertheless.. =) hope to hear from you soon!

i did think, and it still made no sense. but even though it didn't make much sense to me, it was still good. is this a one shot thing? or a story thing?? just curious. keep up the good work!

that was very interesting. i actually enjoyed this. neway same title as my story.

intense, as a friend of mine would put it, but she doesn't read slash so... it's my phrase. i really enjoyed the story. it's somehow sad that all the wanted was a laid and got all ** up in that mess, however, i found all of it very ncie and intriguing.