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FalseReflections 2007-10-19 ch 4,	abuseNO! I liked Rebecca!!...i guess i should start at the beginning... Hi, i read one of your stories, The Affluent and the Destitue and from thr i came into this sequel. And it might seem a little strange but i do like Becky. I hope she's not permanently disposed off. But other than that, you should know that you are the reason i registered with this site, just so i could send in a signed review!! I really loved this story and i think you really do have talent in writing historical romances. i hope you update this soon!! Anyway, i hope this story won't be as confusing as the previous one; thr were so many bets and unexpressed emotions, i keep getting confused who was in love with who. But don't worry, i understood everthing in the end. Update soon! Oh, will we see any other past characters other than Will and (hopefully) Becky? And how old is he now anyway?
boredshitless 2006-11-20 ch 4,	abuseman, i so do not like Will. he uses Rebecca eventhough his brother is his friend and then he brings her all the way to America eventhough he doesnt even love her. And now he just ups and leaves her in this foreign country...he is such a selfish jerk. I thought the main character should at least be likable
Loralak 2006-03-13 ch 4,	abusesplendid!! i was quite delighted by this chapter
Winry Rockbell 2006-03-12 ch 4,	abuseI was so excited to see another chapter! I was wondering how "The Affluent and the Destitute" would play into this story and I loved how you weaved the characters I know into this story. I still really don't like Jessie...maybe I'll sympatjize with her later? Anyway, great chapter, please keep it up! :)
Great-Enchantress 2006-03-11 ch 4,	abuseI love this story so far, it is just so cute and fun! The infamousy of Will Foster and Rebecca Phineas was retold very well, and I enjoyed reading it so much! I hope you continue, I enjoyed this story a lot and I cannot wait to read more. I think I want Sara Beth and Tuck to hook up so far... they sound like they could hit it off well!
lordelfy 2005-12-26 ch 3,	abusevery very good..this is very interesting..i cant wait to read more!
Winry Rockbell 2005-12-19 ch 3,	abuseAnother great chapter! Sara seems to be more cheerful without Jessie around. I hope Jessie doesn't try to act like she does everything that Sara does. I like the new characters, too. I can't wait to read more!
Attica Valeria 2005-12-14 ch 3,	abuseThis is excellent thus far; your details are very convincing and appear to be authentic as far as I know. :) I can't wait to see more.
Loralak 2005-12-13 ch 3,	abuseaah another great chapter.. but.. not much is happening i'm afraid to admit.. sara isn't really saying anything.. but good job nonetheless :)
lordelfy 2005-09-14 ch 2,	abuseyay u updated...i like it...hope u update soon
kittybro 2005-09-11 ch 2,	abuseIs there anything bout Rebecca or David in this?! or is it just going to be about Mary's children?
Winry Rockbell 2005-09-11 ch 2,	abuseThis is a great beginning to this story! I loved "The Affluent and the Destitute" and I hope many of the characters will find their way into this story! I like Sara, but she does not seem to have much of a backbone. I hope Jessie gets slapped! I just have a few pieces of advice and questions:Jessie only turned 16 in February but was teaching school? I thought girls had to be sixteen before they could teach. Where are they living now? (I think I missed it) They would have to leave before April, because I think most trains left for Oregon in early to mid-April. (At least, that is how I have seen in other books) Also, people going to Oregon were called "emigrants," not "immigrants." Immigrants suggests coming from another country. Emigration is within your country. Awesome start, I will be a faithful reader! I love Oregon Trail stories.
Loralak 2005-09-10 ch 2,	abuseoh my goodness!! I can tell that this is the beginning of an excellent story. I loved your last story by the wsy. Therefore, I shall faithfully read this one!! GOOD LUCK MY FRIEND! :D
Twilight Galaxy 2005-09-05 ch 1,	abuseHmm...William (How I dispise that name...) and Rebecca are going to meet with them, right? Well yes. Anyway, is this thing going to have a happy ending? Because the last one didn't... I like Sara's personality. She must really want her father to be happy again, to take that huge risk. I mean, who knows what could go wrong? And Jessie...well, she acts like a spoiled brat. She acts like such a child, not helping her sister with the chores when it's obivous that Sara's really worn out. I have a feeling that the two sisters are going to love the same person and Sara is going to give him up for Jessie because she likes him too. but the man likes Sara...ok, I'm rambling. Sorry! Update Soon!
Kat 2005-09-04 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis was a pretty good first chapter. I can't wait to see how the rest of the story is going to pan out, so here's to hoping that you'll update soon! Besides, it'd be fun to see how this story and your other story are connected to each other!

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