whoa..this is really cool...i like the way this poem is written...awesome job!

AWESOME!

I loved it all, especially the last line... *shivers*...

back and forth, good and bad, black and white...ying and yang. Great subject matter.

Wow, very nicely phrased: "Joyful sinner". Unfortunately, there are a lot of people like that these days, having as you said "no remorse for what they do". Good job.

~happy writing~