in truth we do grow up to a cruel world not knowing whats going to happen..not wanting to know whats going to happen...man i wish i was a lil kid again being all innocent and stuff you here parents telling there childern " honey this is a grown up talk" i wish someone would say that to me now...anyway nice poem...

Hehe, so very true... ^_^

It's awesome how you captures the imagination of the young child. GREAT job! ^_^

I love the conclusion...so tragic.

really cool poem...it is about a faerie ring?