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| Caliber bitchez 2005-10-24 ch 1,  | abusein truth we do grow up to a cruel world not knowing whats going to happen..not wanting to know whats going to happen...man i wish i was a lil kid again being all innocent and stuff you here parents telling there childern " honey this is a grown up talk" i wish someone would say that to me now...anyway nice poem... |
| wolfeh 2005-10-07 ch 1, | abuseHehe, so very true... ^_^ It's awesome how you captures the imagination of the young child. GREAT job! ^_^ |
| ADSpencer 2005-09-04 ch 1, | abuseI love the conclusion...so tragic. |
| lordelfy 2005-09-04 ch 1, | abusereally cool poem...it is about a faerie ring? |