This reminds me of some of my poems...Great job!!

Somehow the last two lines really clicked. They capture so succinctly the essence of what so many people feel...wonderful!^^ The poem expresses the narrator's feelings simply yet clearly.

One teeny thing though: I thought this line, "I fear I will fade" sounded a little awkward. It just didn't seem to fit in with the rest of the poem.. what about "I don't want to fade..."? ^^ Heh, maybe it's just me.

Anyways, good job, keep writing!:)

WOW.

Deep...powerful...emotional...moving... AWESOME!

Rah! Why is this so perfect? Why do I relate to it so well?

This is good... very good. Especially the bit about wanting to be remembered... this is all very true. Please keep writing stuff like this.

Very nice poem. Speaks eons about love.

This is so passionate...when was this written?