better than something i'll think of at dinner

great poem :-)

I liked it, but I think I like your rhyming ones better.

*gasps**faints**says in a hushed voice* this is frickin good!

amber i actually think this is like one of the best ones youve written it just needs a little polishing up...i love you and keep writing

The topic was really good, but it didn't really flow that well and it was kind of hard to understand what you meant. It was still really good though. I like the ending, it was reallu surprising. Keep writing!

vedry good. i like ti. it is the truth. hadn who awants to lie. =i must say i couldnt ever ever go to war. i faint atblood...or at least light headed. and jsut knowing that those pple dieing are tinking they r right, just like you would make it unbareble. i lobe your poem bc it shows that. though i also need to remember how it helps, if it helps

Aw...how sad. I loved it. Keep up the good work. Please read and review!

Powerful language and a very emotive ending. Good work.