That's so beautiful. I love most of your poetry, but I think I love this one the most.

Nice peice. I personally liked it and could relate to parts of it. Wonderful peice.

I like it. It's like you're at a turning point in your life. Your old way of life with this person is gone, shattered. There's no turning back. And yet you can't move forward because you keep looking back. Even though it's gone, they are still there.

I've had a poem come to me in the middle of the night. At 10 pm, to be exact. When I was trying to fall asleep... XD It's called "In Its Purest Form," if you're interested.

"And here, at Forever's End,You're still all I see"It's simplistic and pure. There is a high degree of personal relevence in this poem that enables me to really appreciate it as it is.