Wow...nice little way to create a short time, fast-pace emotion. pretty good.

:licks lips: Wow . . . hot! I think that no names made it seem more . . . dirty will have to do. I loved the ending . . . so . . . final. :giggles: But I think that the use of certain words like "coo" and possibly "giggle" are inappriate for this scene. And I think that I am intrigued to know the story behind this scene. Not why you wrote it, but how the triangle escalated into this. Perhaps I'll write it, or someone else will, someday . . . :grins: I hope so. I smell a good story . . .

Anywho, thanks for all the reviews. :staggers a bit from shock: Last time I had more than 3 reviews in my inbox was when Alex first came back from the dead . . . But thanks so much!! I could never tire of hearing that people love (and will actually read) my poetry. I think all writers are very insecure people. And if they're not, then they suck, and are failures at life.

What? You don't know seasons, or you don't know colors? I definitly got an A on that poem book!! It dominated. And the teacher loved me. I wrote this awesome essay on war, and it's effect on people, turned it in as a handwritten copy to 2 classes and never got it back. Damn eager students. I really wanted it back . . . It was so good and moving, too . . .

Florida was great, and I wasn't attacked by old people. I went to Disney World!! Hooray!!

What is your friend's book called? I want to check it out. What is your friend called? I'm such a bookworm . . . But, please tell me!! I want to publish, but I'm not done writing the story yet! :sweatdrop: Damn! I still haven't written that chapter yet . . .

You know . . . the first step to recovery is admitting you have a problem. You have done that by telling me you are weird. Now go find a rehab clinic somewhere . . . Actually, I was told that rehab is for quitters. It made me laugh.

Nothing is kinda depressing. Argh! Stop sending, no FLOODING, my inbox with reviews . . . you have offically sent me the most reviews EVER! Don't you feel special? =)

Thanks for the support of all your reviews. I will be sending copious amounts of cookies to your e-mail address as soon as I finish this. (reviews tend to smush all the cookies up into crumbs, so e-mail is safer!!)

Hooray for me not answering anymore reviews! Thanks again!!

all my love,felicia

That was good, I liked it. The end was especially good. ^-^ Kudos.

This is really good.

Wow. Just...wow.

CAPTIVATING! And sad at the same time. I hope that never happens to me.

KEEP ON WRITING,Author