Lovely piece. I enjoyed your metaphors-no cliches at all.Nicely done.

This is really beautiful Kathy...oh dear...I can't find anything to criticize you on, which is weird for me...Wait! I'm not saying you're bad! I'm saying that I'm nitpicky...you understand, right? So...this is AWESOME! Kathy gets a HUGE tidal wave for this! (opposite of flame...hehehe)

Um...yeah...and a favor to ask...could you review 'drunk'? please? No one's reviewing that and I'm really not sure why, it's not that bad...right?

Anyway...I LOVE KATHY! WOT!

Blessed be!

wow...that was really really good, descriptive, liquid, beatiful. amazing.