This is an awesome description. You can really see the image... interesting, I've never seen music described in this way. But still. Awesome.

Sometimes playing with the readers emotions can be a more effective tool, then just loading a poem with pretty sights and sounds.

I agree with you saying that music is like a drug. I automatically got that intrepretation with this poem, and it really shows. ^^ Good job...scratch that...GREAT job! I love the fast pace the poem thrives too. It flows so lively and energetically...just like music itself. ^__^ I also love the way you seperated the poem into two different sides. Both can be read as two completely dissimilar poems, but you are a genius, so you mold them into one. ^^ I bow to your mightiness!

Sincerely,

loserz. ;)

This was really, really good. Love it, keep it up.Oh, and don't worry, everyone has their days like this...

I must agree with you interpretation... I love to just lie in my room or wherever I please and loose myself in music... and I know what you mean about not being able to focus... I've been having that problem too... well until you type again...

luv,Chaos

You know what? I'll simply agree with your music-is-a-different-kind-of-drug thought (even though i know you wanted otherwise... hehe) but like you also wrote: "alot of people out there can relate", so so so very true. As far as concentration goes... (don't feel like i', poking at you -- that would be bad!) you... uh, kinda skipped that last parenthisis... and, also, you need to put an ' 'm ' after the 'I' in "that i'm not very concrete..." And as far as THAT goes, dude -- you're FAR from vague! You're an awesome writer! But, best of luck till that month ends, 'cause then I shall be expectin more posts! Pip-pip, and Ta-ta.