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| Ice and Snow 2007-01-21 ch 1,  | abuseyou have too much manga stories, buddy x_x i like the 'lines' in this piece...they're very...linguistically tragic. iono if that makes sense to you. lol. it's a good thing...kk. =] |
| Noihseret 2006-06-28 ch 1, | abusethis poem paints a beautiful picture. you truely have a gift for words. I'm so jelous ^^ |
| Sunset-painter 2006-06-06 ch 1, | abuseOh, god, I love this poem. It has no real...theme, I suppose, but god is it beautiful. |
| KirjavaLyra 2005-10-29 ch 1, | abuseThat was absolutely beautiful. I'm sure you know that already. There's so much I could say. I suppose it really doesn't matter. Great poem. Do you really need more than that? |
| Anime Freakizoid 2005-10-23 ch 1, | abusehey friend, how are you? thanks for your wonderful review, i really needed someone's nice opinon since the chapter was too short. but once again, you are the "Master" of poetry and details. There's nothing short of pure talent in your writing. I await the next masterpiece from you.-anime freakizoid X^_^X |
| Lady Oberon 2005-09-28 ch 1, | abusewow. no words. Lady Oberon |
| celerystalk 2005-09-27 ch 1, | abuseGently tragic. You handle it beautiful, like it was porcelain. Wonderfully done. |
| Moonjava 2005-09-24 ch 1, | abuseThis is amazing. It reads more like a story to me. Then a poem. Very nice. |
| Yatori Shizuku 2005-09-12 ch 1, | abuseAn unorthodox but effective style of poetry. The emotions of love and angst combined together in a "sonata with no cadence". Very striking. Good one. *waiting for Vanilla 2's updates...* |
| mizu no kokoro 2005-09-12 ch 1, | abusewow... so deeply... undescribable~ makes me shiver... Excellent! keep writing! |
| poetic abortion 2005-09-09 ch 1, | abuse" To feel the cold shredding your flesh, and to fall into endless dreams. / (Sing... the verses of tragedy, and carry my oath that no freezing rain could mend.) / and begin... the sonata with no cadence such that forever, in this eternity, I will hear. " - I find that the most poignant line(s). though it was hard to narrow down with such power and beauty accompanied with every line. I'll borrow what Sumi-chan just said: yes, 'delicously dark' fits this poem so well. the tragic, heart breaking and romantic feel just burrows deep inside. leaves your heart aching and physically numb. your styling adds to it and paints such a gorgeous feeling through out it. I can barely contain myself. ~* noelle |
| Cindy Moon 2005-09-08 ch 1, | abuseYou never cease to amaze me with your poetic soul. What a concept, obsidian snow. Anyways, best of luck to you this last year! We're DONE!! I shall have more time to review your longer works, and perhaps even post some of my own. Until then, keep weaving those beautiful words.-Cindy Moon *) |
| Pyreflei 2005-09-08 ch 1, | abuseI like this one, though it sounds really rather sad. Like someone has died... Keep writing such beautiful poetry, I love it so much. |
| snowman 2005-09-07 ch 1, anon. | abusea very unique way of writing a poem. you certainly have a way with words. man you are making me jealous! |
| KonekOniko 2005-09-05 ch 1, | abuseI love the whole feeling of this poem...it's just..."deliciously dark" as you've probably heard others say before. Ah well, wonderful read, hope to see more soon! ~Sumi-chan; What you call love, I call pain. |