Woah, that's good. I like the suspense at the beginning, and the guy with the heart tatoo on his wrist gives the readers some forshadowing. I like how you describe the relationship between Red and Samuel, and everything fits real well. My only suggestion would be to try and use the breaks that they have on this to seperate the parts of the story, but other than that it's really good. I can't wait to read more! Good luck with everything!Keep writing!