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| ... 2006-12-12 ch 3, anon. | abuseTo answer your question at the end of this chapter, I would say, "Yea, I'm REALLY interested, so will you hurry it up and update already?" ^_^ ps. Very well written. :) |
| Lovediamond15 2006-06-18 ch 3,  | abusewow! that was cool! lol, great story, love it! |
| tearitrightup 2006-05-09 ch 3, | abuseLUV IT, KEEP WRITING. |
| Lady Katreina 2005-12-01 ch 3, | abuseMost definatly. Thank you for updating n_n |
| Lady Katreina 2005-12-01 ch 2, | abuseO.o! Uh-oh. Fay is a really good friend and she cheated on her... Hmm. |
| marina eyes 2005-11-30 ch 3, anon. | abuseyes this is very interesting - please update! i gotta know what happens. |
| anamika 2005-11-30 ch 3, | abuseso...the one guy who doesn't want to speak to her has just prvided her her first memory and who is he? drum roll? update soon nice chappie tnt ciao |
| twistedFAerieTALes 2005-11-29 ch 3, anon. | abuseoh la la. green eyes. sexy, lol. |
| Raomina 2005-11-28 ch 3, | abuseWow, she's regaining bits of her memory? I wonder what her relationship with that guy was. They sounded like they were pretty close. Perhaps he was angry at her when she went out with Lance. Oh well, update sooner. |
| goldring 2005-11-28 ch 3, | abuseOh, mucho interesting-ness! I'm wondering...is there going to be any further tie-ins with the matrix? Coz with the title being what it is...and her moment of matrix-esq suspension in the first chapter... Well. You simply MUST update soon so we can learn more, got it? Good. ;-D Keep writing! |
| katieee 2005-11-28 ch 3, | abuseyes. a wee bit interesting. lol. this is really good. ♥K3lay |
| LilLaTLuv 2005-10-28 ch 2, | abuseHey! This is a good chappie, but I take it Lance cheated on her with her best friend Ciera? And, by the way, you put this chappie up in Resisting Him. Just telling ya! But I like this story, it's interesting! I hope she finds out what happened and gets with Tye. Or maybe Grant. But I like Tye! And maybe he'll kick Lance's **. No wonder he was so glad she didn't remember him. Jerk. UPDATE SOON! PLEASE?!? Luv ya,Tashi :) |
| Sabby 2005-10-07 ch 2, anon. | abuseAww! Don't be disappointed with this chapter! I think it's very original, and quite unpredictable... I think that's a good thing? @_@? Anyway hope you update soon, whether this story or the other ones! -Sabby-xoxox- |
| estoOh 2005-09-30 ch 2, | abuseaww i like it! ur a great author... have you ever thought of writing a book? lol... anyways.. loving it! update!! |
| Blood.Butterfly 2005-09-30 ch 2, | abusewell... this is most interesting.. though it may be boring, it'll get better soon. update! |