That was a beautiful story. The way you interpreted it was a way a never thought but fit so sadly and beautifully.

Don't cry...don't cry...*SOB* That was really really REALLY good. I liked the ending a lot "until death do us part" very nice touch. *sniff* I'm OK... Now, just remember to KEEP WRITING (I'm watching you...)

...*sniff* thats so damn good, but freakin hell thats sad! I mean.. *has an emotional breakdown* you HAVE TO WRITE MORE NOW, this is really good, really gets to you, but like.. woah.. maybe i shoudlnt have listened to the song at the same time...awesome! keep it up!