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| jellywelly 2008-02-25 ch 1, | abusecute poem!! simple, but i love it :) |
| skylines 2006-03-27 ch 1, | abuseAww it really isn't bad! You should write more peoms, you honestly do seem to have a talent with them. I found a lot of meaning in it, I use to use a style similar to this in my writing. |
| Overwhelming Screams 2006-03-18 ch 1, | abuseHey plinky...how were you wen you wrote this? it's reli good, chapter 3 of the fallen angel will be up in a while, as a gr. 7 i'm gettin quite a lot of hwk so bare with me. bye, Sarah |
| LEDlorien7 2006-03-14 ch 1, | abusei like it. and anyone who feels poetic impulses is a poet, silly! |
| Broken Melody 2006-03-04 ch 1, | abuse'as I walk in the summer sunshine' I think that line is so very peaceful and very nice. It almost sounds like a rhyme. I think it sounds very nice because at that moment I think of the moment I first went onto a boat and saw the sunshine on the sea. It was a gift to me; like the smallest smile from a stranger. I do not feel I agree that a smile from someone I do not know would be apealing. He or she could be staring at me chest, smiling at only that; leaving me to frown. I think this was nice. |
| Pink Sparrow 2006-02-03 ch 1, | abuseoh WOW. I love the way its written. Its so true! I love the way its written. It's really good. |
| hoowdoideletethisaccount 2006-01-10 ch 1, | abuseThat is adorable! Isn't that the truth?? It means SO much when someone smiles at you, really smiles, looking right into your eyes smiling ONLY for you, only for that moment in time... It can be anybody, but it makes you feel so good. Makes you feel like you're not alone. Very, very sweet poem! |
| Chanteusse 2006-01-02 ch 1, | abusecoincidentally (or not) this happened to me about a week ago and still I can't forget about it. I love it. Will be adding to my favorites. ^_^ |
| Finger Dingbat 2005-12-17 ch 1, | abuselol, made me smile as well, love the wording, and that you dont really connect why she (or you...?) would be giving back a present till u figure out what it is. then it makes perfect sense.sersioly great job... and thanks for the many reviews... |
| sloppy firsts 2005-12-13 ch 1, | abusethis was sweet & simple :) |
| Scratching of my quill (183... 2005-11-30 ch 1, | abuseHi! Thanks for reviewing mine. you sure are a prolific writer! The concept of "a smile from a stranger" is quite cliched, but you made your language and the way you present this makes it stand out! Write on! (that was redundant, looking at the no. of stories you've authored...) anyway, TIS GOOD |
| SaimiChan 2005-11-28 ch 1, | abuseahihi...u sure LOVE poetry. no wonder u always mention "poetry" in ur comments to me. well, to be honest...i ain't too good at poetry. but i've been writting stories since i was in grade school! specifically, Grade4. I started with fics, then made my own stories...then came gravitation...then my ideas just went...BOOM! i HAD to write about yuki eiri...i just HAD TO! hehehe. ^^ |
| Arn 2005-11-27 ch 1, | abuseThis is good. This is good, yeah... I liked it, yeah, a smile can brighten a person's day. Nicely said. X-Eragon-X |
| Kimmi Gray 2005-11-17 ch 1, | abuseOH, I do love this one very much! Heh its so awesomely charming and made me smile as well! Bravo. Thank you very much for reviewing Akaisha, I hope that it works out alright, so please check back!. Some say black, some say white I say GRAY so I'm always right. |
| LilLaTLuv 2005-11-16 ch 1, | abuseHey! Me like! I always smile at random peoples. Very cool. I like it a lot. You have no clue what you're talking about until the end. PERFECT! KEEP IT UP! Luv ya,Tashi :) |