Great story,keep up the good work.

man this story was an absolute blast to read - thank you so much for holding onto the inspiration for it and completing it - I will probably end up reading it at least 10x more times :D

thanks again!

ari x0x0

word arr not enough to express what am i feeling right now..! you are an amazing story teller and i absolutely love Love Bites to pieces..i just finished reading it , and for this story i skip eating and hanging out with my friends because i cant seem to stop hitting the next chapter button..
i love Dan and Rafe..i absolutely love his name "Rafe"..such an awesome and pretty name to give to a singer in a band..
i just love it and i cant seem to want it to end but you just end it with an absolutely great and full filing epilogue..
and i love it!!..you have everybody in a way have their own ending and whats to come in the future..

*LOVE*
-faves-

This story is one example of 'beautiful'. Nope, not a 'beautiful story', just 'beautiful'. This story captured so many emotions, you know, placed them into one story. Well, think about it, it's a bunch of different stories melding into one, entirely.

I just wished that Jake got a happy ending, because Heaven above knows that he deserves it. It makes me want to convince you to write a side-story-sequel kind of thing with Jake as yer lovely protagonist... but it might be too much pressure on you, with "The Black Book Index" and such. Well, I was glad to come across this story, and read and review it. Heaven knows that this story deserves all the praise. :D

Let me break it down:

- You've got the plot down really good, and you cut the chapters at just the right time, enough to build suspense.
- Length. I really got annoyed, because I'm a 'quick-read' kind of person, but then the quality of this story just made the quantity of the chapters worth it :)
- Characters. They are all so lovable. Especially Jake, he's so sweet. Gawd, give him a boyfriend!
- THIS CHAPTER. I love the closure that you gave it, and can I just comment on some of the sentences/statements that you wrote on here? :D

"It didn’t matter, so he’d said. He said he was doing okay.
Then again, I guess we all say that we’re ‘okay’, that we’re all ‘fine’, when it couldn’t be more blatantly obvious that we aren’t."
-that statement is so true. It happens to me all the time, and the realism of that statement is just interesting to look at. I laughed when I saw it. XD

"... There had been moments in the past year when I was sure that things would crumble, but somehow we'd managed to stay as strong as we could be in the situation we found ourselves in. You couldn't really look out and plan the future when the present was still a guessing game, but that didn't matter to us. After all, we had now to work on together."
-this one's so touching. It's that bit of fluff that you hold on to, KNOWING that everything will be alright in the end, especially after...

"I wanted to be able to say that we'd stay together forever, that we wouldn't ever need anyone else but each other. But that would be a fairytale, and this was real life.
Anyway, it was always better living in our reality than hidden behind our mesh of lies."
- this one is reality, and it's sad and tragic, really, but after that statement above this one, I hope things will work.

Well, I talked as if the characters are real. Well, it's because they were MADE real. That's what I have to thank you for. This thing sprung out from meeting each other in some grungy bar, huh. Wouldn't believe it. It's almost as if Rafe and Dan had been best friends for life.

Awesome story; you got me fixed to it like glue. Hope you write more! Oh, and I apologize for rambling.

LOVED it! it was awesome

Wow, just wow. I love this. It's so adorable and sexy at the same time. It's so sappy if you think about it, but when you're reading, it doesn't matter. It's just so awesome. I love it.

Favoriting! :3

Well... hi? I have to say, I always feel awkward about reviewing stories that people finished such a long time ago-but I think this story deserves a review because I loved it so much! :D All your characters were so wonderful, I loved all of them to little, teeny tiny bits. I have to admit, I was rooting for Dan and Rafe the entire time because they're both completely amazing-but Jake was such a sweetheart it was hard to believe. If I had been in Jake's position, I would have handled it quite a bit worse then he did. You did wonderfully with his character as well by the way... I felt like he actually had a purpose in the story aside from just being an obstacle in Rafe and Dan's relationship. ...And your descriptions of their concerts made me really, really want to go watch one... Sigh... But wow, ok I totally love you for writing this... you deserve a bunch of hugs, and cookies! Yummy cookies with lots of chocolate chips. So, great job!! ::hugs:: I'm so sad it's over that I might just have to go read it again. Wonderful darling! ;D

~Dawn

For your first story, it was wonderful. It had a lot of mistakes at the begining but as the story went along the mistakes seemed to appear less often. Like at the begining the emotions and actions of the characters seemed rushed and hollow but at the ending they went smoothly and deep, your characters took life. Though even though in the end you still had some problems in making it clear when the scenes changed, it wasn't as notable as it was in the begining. Most of important was that the plot of the story was very creative, it was a joy to read. Your story was enjoyable and wonderful and I can't wait to read the rest of your works.

Well, gawsh, I adored it, and I thought the ending was absolutely perfect.

Freaking WHOA. I love it so far, but I got here, and I'm like, I've been reading this forever, when's it gonna end? And I looked, and there's like fifty chapters to this thing. So I'm definitely going to read the rest tomorrow. This is like a bookmark. :D

I swear, they're gonna die from exhaustion! Oh, so THAT'S where Madame Tussaud's is!!

I enjoyed reading this (I have a thing for stories featuring musicians). It could use a going over from someone else (there were quite a few mistakes, and not just with the unneccesary dashes, but words like 'maybe' made into two words when it's actually one) though to improve the writing over all.

Why do you have hyphens in so much of your diologue? Like, "-I'll be in my room." There's really no reason for them. You usually have a hyphen at the end of someone talking if someone else is cutting them off.