How depressing! I really like "“twinkle twinkle little fable/twisted with the fall of Babel" .

“twinkle twinkle little fable/twisted with the fall of Babel/

love that part.

this is a wonderful poem. very clever and witty and insightful.

Urgh, enough with the pessimism! You have to believe in life! But I must admit, this has blown me away...so good! Love the queens who forgot their chastity belts...but man, it's very harsh! Like most your stuff actually...but brilliant! You're a genius! Love,Mia

This was brilliant. :)

I'm loving the almost-rhyming, cynical take on fairy-tales, and the whole feel of the piece. Nice work.

haha. i love this. you have such an imagination P

I like how you make an irony of all those popular fairy tales; they're too good to be true.

EB

i like this very much, although i DO like fairy tales...anyways, love the poem, see more sometime soon -

ha yeah it rhymes!

not that this was really really sad or anything, but MELLY, you go WRITE SOMETHING HAPPY NOW.

Oh the sardonic/caustic/british humor in this is lovely. So well done, as usual.

Cute rhyming and a snappy wit.

heh. the rhyme really did nothing for me except take away from the poem. great concept, but since the rhyming was very inconsistent, it made it difficult to read. very cool idea though.

-salt.

disturbing i say.

that was excellent. very true, very striking. there's a lot of gruesomeness in fairy tales but we love 'em nonetheless (PS: I keep forgetting when you change your name! AH! but I like your new one)

That was an intense and haunting read... It seems for Hans Christian Anderson there is a force to be reckoned with.

The overall theme's a bit tired but I love the way you put it across! Oh, the acid rain rhyme was priceless x).