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| Nemonus 2006-07-27 ch 1,  | abuseHow depressing! I really like "“twinkle twinkle little fable/twisted with the fall of Babel" . |
| crinkled aster ribbon 2006-02-17 ch 1, | abuse“twinkle twinkle little fable/twisted with the fall of Babel/ love that part. this is a wonderful poem. very clever and witty and insightful. |
| Aimee Raven 2006-02-06 ch 1, | abuseUrgh, enough with the pessimism! You have to believe in life! But I must admit, this has blown me away...so good! Love the queens who forgot their chastity belts...but man, it's very harsh! Like most your stuff actually...but brilliant! You're a genius! Love,Mia |
| Boadicia 2006-01-23 ch 1, | abuseThis was brilliant. :) I'm loving the almost-rhyming, cynical take on fairy-tales, and the whole feel of the piece. Nice work. |
| Ice and Snow 2006-01-08 ch 1, | abusehaha. i love this. you have such an imagination =P |
| Elizabeth Bilberry 2005-11-27 ch 1, | abuseI like how you make an irony of all those popular fairy tales; they're too good to be true. EB |
| KonekOniko 2005-09-27 ch 1, | abusei like this very much, although i DO like fairy tales...anyways, love the poem, see more sometime soon ^-^ |
| rei 2005-09-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseha yeah it rhymes! not that this was really really sad or anything, but MELLY, you go WRITE SOMETHING HAPPY NOW. |
| addie pray 2005-09-14 ch 1, | abuseOh the sardonic/caustic/british humor in this is lovely. So well done, as usual. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-09-09 ch 1, | abuseCute rhyming and a snappy wit. |
| AboveTheSalt 2005-09-09 ch 1, | abuseheh. the rhyme really did nothing for me except take away from the poem. great concept, but since the rhyming was very inconsistent, it made it difficult to read. very cool idea though. -salt. |
| lloyd 2005-09-08 ch 1, anon. | abusedisturbing i say. |
| wordsworth in a garbage can 2005-09-07 ch 1, | abusethat was excellent. very true, very striking. there's a lot of gruesomeness in fairy tales but we love 'em nonetheless (PS: I keep forgetting when you change your name! AH! but I like your new one) |
| Dorian D 2005-09-06 ch 1, | abuseThat was an intense and haunting read... It seems for Hans Christian Anderson there is a force to be reckoned with. |
| Ohmm 2005-09-05 ch 1, | abuseThe overall theme's a bit tired but I love the way you put it across! Oh, the acid rain rhyme was priceless x). |