:O not another dagger :Othis is like macbeth revisited...hope u write some more..ur soo good matey :D

hoy! u WEIRDO - muahahaha

morbid morbid weirdo - what would our gang be without u !?!

lovve it !

Interesting and intense, it makes one want to invent a background story. Nice job.

Short, dark and vivid. A little too fast paced for me, but it suits this pom well. :)