:o I would like to here the guitar with that. Good use of rhyme and repetition.

hm... very interesting. It has a nice gothic texture to it and has just the right amount of sorrow. not all that used to reviewing songs but i still like it. Good job!

aww, that was so.. .angsty ^_^ me likes

This is so awesome, great job!

woah, amazing. that was just amazing. now one of my favorite songs on this website. beautiful. i'm speechless. k/w

left behind,~shadowofyou~

three words. pub-lish-er. this NEEDS to be a song, it really, really does. this is just...wow. you watch. patent it, send it in to different agents, it'll be the next emo chart-topper. it's just amazing.

~please review me back! -girlnheadphones

Really good lyrics. I particularly adore the line, 'Pierces my pale unwritten will.' All verses and chorus were cleverly written. Hope to read more from you! -thumbs up-