I like the simple way this is written, as well as the message.

This is beautiful... i love this. its so wellwritten, its on my favorites list. i can relate.
and props to you for showing a piece of your soul through poetry. i know its not always an easy thing to do. but you did it wonderfully.
its amazing and inspiring. great, great work.

Beautiful. I can tell you've put alot of emotion into this one. And no, it doesn't rhyme or the format isn't special, ext. but i think that makes it all the better. It's a good poem and the reader can tell that. But, without trying to out do yoursef with format, you were able to concentrate on the emotion behind the words that you were writing. And it turned out beautifully.

nicely done. i like this poem. i can relate almost exactly to the words being said here. k/w

left behind,~shadowofyou~