|Reviews for occupy me mind|
| Matelot001 10/25/06 . chapter 1
What can I say? who hasn't felt this, I know I have, I still do occationally, wouldnt life be so much easier if everyone liked who liked them...
keep up the good work, and thanks for the reviews
| dragonelemental 11/23/05 . chapter 1
OK, this one sounds more like about ben than dave. Pretty good though, stop repeating urself in the poem though, find a different way of phrasing it.
| Miss-Nina 11/17/05 . chapter 1
sad, but that totally makes me think of myself. I totally crazy about (ahem), can't say the name. But I know what you mean. Awesome, and sorry I haven't reviewed in a while, Lioness.
| sunday night sky 9/23/05 . chapter 1
i can really relate to that poem... as everyone can, i think. :)
| In Search of Sunrise 9/21/05 . chapter 1
Very nice! haha I liked the rythm of how you always focused on your mind...so it has a very nice flow
| Meira Evenstar 9/18/05 . chapter 1
Oh, wow! I can really relate to this poem. Very good.
| Aquafied 9/5/05 . chapter 1
i love that last poem does seem a bit cliche
and the beginning reminds me of a pirate. argh.
| Ether Boy 9/5/05 . chapter 1
i understand everything said here. its happened to me before (of course i kept thinking of a girl in my case). This has a nice little flow in it. quite good i must say.