What can I say? who hasn't felt this, I know I have, I still do occationally, wouldnt life be so much easier if everyone liked who liked them...

keep up the good work, and thanks for the reviews

OK, this one sounds more like about ben than dave. Pretty good though, stop repeating urself in the poem though, find a different way of phrasing it.

sad, but that totally makes me think of myself. I totally crazy about (ahem), can't say the name. But I know what you mean. Awesome, and sorry I haven't reviewed in a while, Lioness.

nina-chan

i can really relate to that poem... as everyone can, i think. :)

Very nice! haha I liked the rythm of how you always focused on your mind...so it has a very nice flow

Oh, wow! I can really relate to this poem. Very good.

i love that last poem does seem a bit cliche

and the beginning reminds me of a pirate. argh.

i understand everything said here. its happened to me before (of course i kept thinking of a girl in my case). This has a nice little flow in it. quite good i must say.