Reviews for Antisocial Schizoid

Decollage 2005-12-18 ch 5,	abuseSort of an abrupt ending, but I'm glad it worked out. Good story, overall, although you might have added how he came to be in a cottage by the sea... Seems a big step up from the past. I like the detective's reactions, very realistic.
Decollage 2005-12-18 ch 4,	abuseHa... Perfect touch, the letter. Somehow I expected daddy issues.
Decollage 2005-12-18 ch 3,	abuseI like the rabbits. They're sort of metaphorical, I suppose, to the Shadow's statement of being animal. Can't wait until they find the copy-cat.
Decollage 2005-12-18 ch 2,	abuseMy only complaint is the use of the word 'goth'. It takes away from the story, it's like cheating. A social or musical label is a damn sorry excuse for real description- better to let the reader draw that conclusion through your description- or even the character. If Gabriel, or one of his alter-egos, had described him as goth, it would have stayed an in-character judgement, and thus beyond your responsibility. I'm wondering why they keep saying Gabe is afraid to aknowledge the past. I sense backstory...
Decollage 2005-12-18 ch 1,	abuseNice prolouge- I love the characterization here, and while it might have been annoying not to have any physical description, it's a prolouge, and thus fine with a bit of blanks. The childish one interests me.
terroristofpaper 2005-09-05 ch 3,	abusejuz correcting you, via means road not lifevita means lifenice story tho... kinda on the short side though