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My Amadeus 2006-06-07 . chapter 1
I love this poem...it's so hopeful and optimistic. And, yes, I've heard of the eyelash=wish. It's so quaint and I don't know. Great job with this! I like the short poems. Thanks so much for reviewing my poem! The 'handsome stranger'...loved your take on it.
CyanMaelstrom 2006-02-04 . chapter 1
I like this... I get the image of an eyelash looking (doesn't really have eyes, but whatever) daringly up at the sky and saying, "BRING IT ON!"
Moondog Dozier 2006-01-03 . chapter 1
Very good take on a superstition that is universal. I like how you continued the feeling into other areas, and made this a wonderful read because it asks questions that all seem to ask at times.
White Tea and Ginger 2005-10-01 . chapter 1
I like this. An interesting thought.
rustupidorjustnotbright 2005-10-01 . chapter 1
I like the questions you have in this poem, nicely written.
Aslan Israel 2005-09-19 . chapter 1
Uplifting. Just lovely.
simpleplan13 2005-09-09 . chapter 1
I like the last line... nice job
Glowing Aura 2005-09-08 . chapter 1
cute poem! Hey, I believe in the Butterfly Effect, so I think I can believe in the Eyelash Wish. :-) How about you?
hann 2005-09-07 . chapter 1
aww! i understand that one, very nice!!
Ode to Maddness 2005-09-06 . chapter 1
that is cute
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