Reviews for Song of the Butterfly

Vixen of Vienna 2007-06-19 ch 1,	abuseAww, that was so cute! I love it. Garden gnomes ... kind of scarry ...
BlueJayWalking 2005-09-07 ch 1,	abuseThis is really good! I love the word flutter-by!! It's so pretty and suits butterflies prefectly..sometimes I just think that they SHOULD be called flutter-bys instead!^^ I love the rhyming here, the lightheartedness is brought out beautifully in this poem.. just makes me want to hop around with it! Hehehe it's really great - write more like this!!
mizu no kokoro 2005-09-05 ch 1,	abusePretty!~ butterflies are such beautiful creatures^^ wonderful poem! keep writing!
La Gitane 2005-09-05 ch 1,	abuseI adore this. :) It has the feeling of a bubbling summery joy dancing over the words, and reminds me very much of little rhymes I used to read as a child, from one of those flower fairy books. Your words are very well chosen - bright and springy, and butterfly-flutterby again add to the buoyancy of the piece. Exclamation marks too, vintage in use, and very touching. This really has the power to make a person a smile instantly - I think it lies in the poem's innate sense of innocence and happiness - so well done!
pianofingers7 2005-09-05 ch 1,	abuseI love happy poems. This is a happy poem. I really like it. Very good imagery.