Aw how sweet! The rhyming was really good in this one, love it:)

Aw! So sweet!! The rhyming worked really well here. Bravo. Whoo. I can't got too much to say... My favorite line was about the father and mother. For some reason it seemed really sweet without being sappy... Well I guess the whole poem was sappy but oh well. Good job!

wow, that didn't make me want to throw up

:/

AWESOME!