That was gorgeous, very powerful and emotional, but also something that, I think, we can all relate to.
I think I'm falling in love with your writing...

Who is this intriguing female? She truly is interesting.

Wow. This reminds me of myself. How powerful.

This is an excellent start, and I really want the next chapter. Update soon!

I like it. It has this very raw feeling to it near the end. Very very good.

it's the sort of thing that really makes a person think... I liked it very much. I know what something like that is like, too... I hope it's not the only chapter, I'd like to read more about it.