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| ErikaSlytherin 2008-07-27 ch 15,  | abuseits a great story but do you think maybe you could explain all the japenese words? i really like the story but the japenese went straight over my head. |
| pull-the-trigger 2008-07-24 ch 15, | abuse** that was great. I'm not sure if I reviewed this story before but if I haven't, then I want to just tell you I'm a BIG fan of your writing :D Peace |
| Ngoc1231 2008-06-27 ch 15, | abuseAw. Well atleast they are together in the end right? And she's a phoenix right? And everyone dreams of finding the perfect guy and being with him forever! Cute story! ~*~Ngoc1231~*~ |
| Procrasti-Reader 2008-06-17 ch 15, | abuseI really loved this story. It was so heart-braking but wonderful. |
| featherstone13 2008-06-05 ch 15, | abusei love it but it was so sad tords the end but i lov it! -featherstone13- |
| Gentle. Edge. 2008-05-16 ch 2, | abuseIt's kinda odd how the principal would get all the attention on this 'criminal' since most of the time they wouldn't... but it was really interesting to read. :) |
| ItalianQT 2008-04-22 ch 15, | abuseGood story! :-) |
| Eva 2008-04-22 ch 15, anon. | abuseThat was a great story it actually made me cry! |
| righthere431 2008-04-21 ch 4, | abusepoor darien =/ |
| righthere431 2008-04-21 ch 3, | abuselol i see theyre getting along well |
| righthere431 2008-04-21 ch 2, | abusehehe i like bad boys =] lol |
| righthere431 2008-04-21 ch 1, | abusecool lol |
| xiia0moonlight 2008-04-11 ch 15, | abuseit's nice . the ending is nto that bad, but i dont really get it. nevertheless, i still enjoyed it (: |
| FizzyTwilight 2008-04-10 ch 15, | abuseAw... LovedIt. But yeah, WHY did he save the stupid folk? Fate or not, that's just silly =[ and it almost screwed up the happy ending.. cause they're both dead now? Together, but dead.. ish? Or both phoenixes? Or one phoenix and one dead spirit? Confused a little. |
| Sapheneia 2008-04-07 ch 15, | abuseIt was good that they ended up together. That was awesome! But i'm confused about the end how come he isn't a phoenix at the end and is she really dead? Are they in a different world or the afterlife? Is she going to be a phoenix too now? Is he only sometimes a phoenix like when he wants to be? Or during a certain period of time? I'm sorry to ask all of this but i really want to know!! |