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| eighteen hundred 2005-09-05 ch 1,  | abusePretty good. Some cliche word usage but overall, it didn't scream cliche like so much stuff on this site does, which was refreshing. Maybe you could try just replacing some more commonly used words with, well, less commonly used ones, just to make it more interesting. Other than that, no complaints, good piece here. |