I admit that made me want to lose my breakfast, but it needed to be that way, I think, for you to make your point without sounding whiney. How you contrasted your own uniquely putrid imagery with the cliched imagery of 'angst' and 'cutting' was much appreciated.

argh.. painfully good, your contrasts are exquisite... I love the sharpness of this, the detailed destruction, even though it's not pretty (well that's not entirely true either, your arrangement of words and images are artful) it is very powerful.

mezzie

Striking.Õ

*jumps up and down in excitement* How GRAPHIC! I'm going to go puke now. Mission accomplished. And since I've been handing out high fives all day, here you go. You've earned it. *high five*

Wow. That was amazing. Great job. You summed up so many emotions that generally seem to be surpressed inside.

geez so vivid and alive with gruesome detail. yeah you really know how to go all out. who is this person by the way? nice poem

Amazing--beautifully written. The concept is really something else. It works, strikingly startling.

That's a really good poem. Though, I think I may like it for the use of gore...

This is strikingly beautiful. It's a mess, but a lovelymess. I love the images with "I'm a bloody mess rotting in a corner". Nicely done!