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| youzi 2005-09-09 ch 1,  | abuseThis is a really well written piece...somewhat poetic in its abstraction but never deviating from the central tone..do keep writing =D |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-09-07 ch 1, | abuseHow true. One of your purest pieces, one that speaks of truth so profoundly, and yet I still doubt people will listen. I feel the loss of faith in humanity, and sense the deep isolation in this writing. Humanity, a cancer, a blot on the surface of a world that is too great to think we are significant and yet we are still destroying it and ourselves. Cancer is suicidal and ultimately deadly, in one form or another. |