Beautiful, intelligent, i was very very impressed by this, it's so much more poetic than the typical, "we borke up and now my life sucks" thats the basic concept but its displayed in a unique, creative, poetic way. I realy like this piece, very well done.

Absolutely gorgeous poem! You had me at "walls thirty miles wide". Crushingly melancholy... I like how rich in metaphor and imagery the poem is, yet the message remains focal and unfettered-- a rare thing on this site! I look forward to reading your other works.