I haven't the time to read the rest, but i will. i love the style of it, and the colours you put in the story. its seems to suggest that it'll be a great story, so i'm looking forwards to reading more.

Thanks for reviewing my work. Erm, i use a british spelling unless my computer is up to its old tricks. the grammar and commas is quite true, i tend to use long sentences. the descriptions at the begining were a little too flowery because i hadn't yet settled on a style of writing yet for this story, it gets more consistent as you read on.

Still amazingly written, and I'm glad other people have reviewed it now :)

By the way, thanks for reviewing Demonica :)

I love this story so far. The love triangle is already quite interesting; and the hint of impending doom makes me wait impatiently for the next update.

I can smell a delicious tale of morbid fantasy embarking. Very well presented, the flashback creates a mysterious shroud about the progression of the plot. Can't seem to access the second chapter, though..

Wow, amazingly written, I can't believe no one else has reviewed this :(

Very well written, is all I can say at this stage.